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Falling Blossoms by ~GodTiger:iconGodTiger:



Title: Falling Petals

“You’re all nothing more than  Fictional characters That I created in my mind! ” That what he said.

Polka sighed as she watched Ritardando from above the cliff of Tenuto. Why? Why did he have to say all that? Why did he have to fight them?

“ We’ll see if I’m truly such a Weak human being!” She smiled as he thought of those words.

Was he always like this way? When they had first met, of course he was a bit silly and odd but she’d liked him. She’d partly believed him when he said this was his dream. But not in a sense That “This” was a dream but in a sense nothing and nowhere was absolute reality. He seemed more distant as they fought together.

He stayed only a bit more… She’d looked up to the sky as he began to tell her, he was no longer going to stay here.

Tears filled her eyes remembering the last place he went before his final goodbyes to this world was in Heaven’s Fields.

If only… If only… she’d could of made him stay a little more.

Maybe he… no… He need to sleep, his family on the other world. No he could of never been happier here. But she’d needed him,

Polka needed him.
©2008 ~GodTiger
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I HATE POLKA BASHERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I MEAN WHAT THE FUCK DID SHE DO TO PISS PPL OFF? :pissed:

I think she felt sad. I mean when i used her to fight Fredric

But doesn't anyone see Fredric in the end of the game standing up??? I did o-o... everybody says he left In my personal opinion he still there.
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~cup--cake:iconcup--cake: Jan 21, 2008, 7:46:28 AM
polka is a sweet and gentle personality...
i love what you write each and every word of it...
really its beautifull! but yeah i saw him standing to!

thats kinda weird .. does he live in he's dream world again or something?..
i mean why would they let him stand..?
~GodTiger:iconGodTiger: Jan 21, 2008, 10:59:30 AM
x3 Maybe after he saved her (somehow) He healed himself (not knowing) or when she'd came back up he was revive - Version 1

Version 2-- He's a spirit with Flesh and blood and somewhat immortal. (Which would explain why his phyical body change o.0 (because we all know NO-ONE has blue hair in our world) .) Which could be the "Astera" That cover his body, So that would make somewhat immortal (not too much but...) and that's how he's able to stay in they're world.

I'm not sure which one is truer but... I don't think HIs "Dream World" is a Dream at all x3 I love all those characters too much to believe that!

THANKS for Commenting XD!!!

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"I never need love, because I never was..loved" :(

"I want to dream happier dreams than I'm dreaming now, But I'm still dreaming the dream to exceapt my own reality that aren't so happy now"

"That's why I'm happy for it"
~eternalsonataclub:iconeternalsonataclub: Jan 21, 2008, 7:45:57 PM
I like it, but the grammatical mistakes are glaring at me ...
~eternalsonataclub:iconeternalsonataclub: Jan 21, 2008, 7:47:09 PM
Maybe not grammar, but rather ... typos? I can't say for sure, but there are mistakes. ^-^;;
~GodTiger:iconGodTiger: Jan 21, 2008, 10:10:04 PM
D; Yeah... I have some problems writting (and living in Italy isn't helping >.<!!)

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"I never need love, because I never was..loved" :(

"I want to dream happier dreams than I'm dreaming now, But I'm still dreaming the dream to exceapt my own reality that aren't so happy now"

"That's why I'm happy for it"
~GodTiger:iconGodTiger: Jan 22, 2008, 9:47:36 AM
V-V I hope the next fanfic (It will be longer) you'll like as well.

But I simple can't decide if i wanna do Polka/Fredric or Allegretto/Fredric, what would you perfer?

PS: Yaoi seems wrong to do to a dead man doesn't it?:(

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"I never need love, because I never was..loved" :(

"I want to dream happier dreams than I'm dreaming now, But I'm still dreaming the dream to exceapt my own reality that aren't so happy now"

"That's why I'm happy for it"
~cup--cake:iconcup--cake: Jan 22, 2008, 10:51:58 AM
yeah i think it is not a dream so thats why he's a life...


(i did come up with the stupids ideas before i realised it.. hehehe...)



and for your next one allegretto<3 he's so cute :3
~cup--cake:iconcup--cake: Jan 22, 2008, 12:35:09 PM Mood: Sentimental
yeah i think it is not a dream so thats why he's a life...


(i did come up with the stupids ideas before i realised it.. hehehe...)



and for your next one allegretto<3 he's so cute :3
~GodTiger:iconGodTiger: Jan 22, 2008, 9:32:48 PM
Fdredric/allegretto? x3... ok.

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"I never need love, because I never was..loved" :(

"I want to dream happier dreams than I'm dreaming now, But I'm still dreaming the dream to exceapt my own reality that aren't so happy now"

"That's why I'm happy for it"